Eeep!

•October 26, 2009 • Leave a Comment

So then, it’s been a while I know. And I’ve been working to try and get another update finished but that’s come to a screeching halt considering I had to uninstall and reinstall my Sims game when my laptop crashed. So I’ve been attempting to rebuild and put together Letaine again, though this time there will be a few changes made to both the story and the characters. I’ll be slowly getting introduction chapters up again to reflect these changes and then, hopefully, I’ll be able to keep going with the story.

I’ll keep this post up until I get to a point where I could feasibly start posting again. Thanks for your patience!

phillip finds a housekeeper

•August 5, 2009 • 3 Comments

roderick sees the worth of his kingdom

•July 29, 2009 • 2 Comments

margaret perceives new beginnings

•July 25, 2009 • 2 Comments

the burdened

•May 3, 2009 • 2 Comments

The fires had died down. One by one along the shores the lights were fading, only distant memories as the embers burned in the pits they had dug into the sands. Almost all had ventured onto the beach and there was talking of the men wishing to explore once morning came. They didn’t know a thing about this place that had seemingly showed up without so much as a warning upon the horizon. Even Lord Rosseau couldn’t find anything among his books and maps of the world that could begin to explain what had happened. The storm had jostled and turned them upon the ocean for days and then they finally had landed upon a foreign shore; many were simply grateful that their lives had been spared and that the gods were smiling kindly upon them at last.

Their exiled King, however, couldn’t see things quite so clearly or so optimistically.

David Marisen stared into the fire within the hearth. It had been light only an hour ago and was still burning strongly into the night. He knew he should have slept, for there was much to do the next day yet he found sleep evaded him. His fingers ran through his hair, frowning into the flames. How had it come to this? One year ago he could have told anyone confidently that life was going in the right direction for him and for his kingdom. There had been over a thousand years of peace and his family had successfully held onto the throne in this time. The people were happy and there was life within the court; more so than ever had been. Everything was going his way up until that dreadful night of the ball.

He prodded at the fire uselessly before sitting again, resting his head back against the chair. The captains quarters had been made readily available for the royal family once they had landed. The shore was only a short trip by row boat yet he felt easier with him and his family safely asleep within the cabin. Caleb, he already knew, was fast asleep, thumb probably stuck firmly into his mouth with happy dreams rolling through his head. His wife should have been sleeping as well, yet from the lack of heavy breathing across the room, he knew that she was still awake, like he, and probably thinking as well.

He’d had a wife who he adored (for the most part), a son and heir to the throne, and a people who loved him (well so he thought at least). But he couldn’t have accounted for Betram’s declaration of war upon him and his court.

Bertram! The boy he had grown up with, a cousin to play with when the summers dragged on and someone who could match David in skill on horseback. They had been like brothers for years and had always seen one another through. This betrayal was the lowest of lows that his cousin could stoop to. Yet he had not seen anything wrong in the months (or had it been years?) in the climb towards that fateful evening.

Truthfully, David had played the fool. Nothing could go on so placidly, so peacefully without something changing the course of things. And Bertram had done exactly that; after the declaration, civil war and unrest had plagued the nation. Blood ran on the streets of the major cities as families, friends, and colleagues were pitted against one another to pick the side they believed in and, for some, to pick the winner. David didn’t like war; he never had the stomach for it, unlike his father, but Bertram never faltered in the seven month campaign for the throne. In the end, David had become tired of seeing death, tired of watching his court suffer, and found talk of betrayal (yet again) was close at hand, within his own home! It had been best for them all to leave.

David shifted in his chair, hearing the soft rustle of fabric against skin as his wife moved, changing position in bed (perhaps in a way to get more comfortable in it). He stayed in his seat though, refusing to move as he stared into the fire. He couldn’t rightfully have left all of them to the hands of his cousin. No matter how close they had been, David had feared for the lives of his family and of those who continued to follow him through the war. They snuck away in the dead of night, hurrying to the docks, boarding a ship with a captain willing to take them along the seas. A merchant by trade, Mister Basil Mills had graciously shared his ship with the close to fifty occupants that had clambered aboard his home. They’d gone almost a fortnight upon the sea, bound for Messaih where David had allies when the storm blew them off course, landing them…here.

But where was here? That was the question that no one had the answer to. The scholar Lord Rosseau had searched through his books and scrolls and couldn’t find any mention of an island lying this far south of their home. There was nothing and that in itself was baffling to all who tried to piece together where they had landed. The chain of islands was unfamiliar, lush and green when they had come from the last traces of autumn (and assured of a harsh winter). It was a strange place, to say the least, and there had been a few parties of men sent to map the big island in the center of it all.

David stood again, moving to the bottle of whiskey in the corner, carefully pouring himself a drink, downing the first before he took a second. He sipped at it, closing his eyes against the familiar burn, aware that it would hit him sooner than he thought. Unlike some of the men he kept company with at court, David had a lower tolerance for the spirits they shared following the evening meal when their wives would retire, careful not to attempt in keeping up with men like Edmund, who would drink the King under the table given the chance. He sat again, though his head turned as he heard the soft rustle of fabric and the creak of the bed, catching sight of his wife coming from the shadows into the candlelight.

Still shaking whatever sleep she had in her mind, Ava frowned against the firelight, blinking rapidly before she could look him in the eye. They didn’t speak for a few moments; David remained neutral while Ava’s soft features betrayed her emotions from the very start. First he saw the concern reflected in her eyes firstly for him. He hadn’t come to bed yet, barely spoken a word since they had retired for the evening. She was worried about their situation, worried for their people more than she worried for herself but underneath that, he knew that there was irritation. “David,” She said finally, “come to bed.”

Oh, it was sorely tempting. David was weary of the day; sleep could relieve him of the woes of today and bring him fresh into tomorrow. He could strip off the clothes from today and fall asleep in Ava’s loving embrace. But while his body remained weary, his mind refused to shut down. Instead, he shook his head, downing the remaining whiskey in the glass, playing with the heavy object between his hands.

“Not yet, Ava,” He muttered with a sigh. “Not yet. Go back to sleep, I’ll be there soon.” He glanced over his shoulder, catching her expression. She stood, lips pursed together into a line and he thought she was going to snap at him. Instead, though, the expression faded and instead of turning back to bed she moved forwards, gliding towards the fire. She held her hands before the blaze, warming her fingertips before grabbing the poker he had left alongside it, prodding the embers along the side back to life again.

“I’ll stay up with you then.”

“No, Ava,” David’s voice dropped to a low growl as she turned back to him. He wasn’t looking for company here and now, not when he wanted only to feel self-pity. But it seemed there was no telling her otherwise as she huffed lightly, quirking a brow at him in the firelight.

“I wasn’t asking you, David. I was telling.” Something had changed in Ava since they had left in the dead of night. The woman David had married had grown tougher skin than she had back home, become a woman who wasn’t nearly as meek as she had been before, and whose mind was geared better in this stressful situation than his own was. Part of him knew that he should be thankful for having married such a woman, but another part of him was angry; why couldn’t the Saints give him the strength he needed rather than laying everything down upon his wife? His people were supposed to be looking towards him to show the way, not his wife.

She sat on the couch just alongside his, hands pressed delicately into the folds of her nightgown. They sat in silence for a few long moments before, carefully, Ava broke it once again. “I know it’s hard,” She muttered softly, “all of this.” She took a breath, “But you can’t simply shut me out like this, David. Let me take some of the load.”

“Ava-” David started but she cut him off swiftly.

“It’s not healthy, for starters, staying up late like this and drinking your problems away,” She paused momentarily as a soft laugh escaped her lips. “I’d half expect Edmund to do that, not you.” She had that right and David knew it; he couldn’t hide the very small smile that touched his face.

“You look tired,” He said finally, watching her as she rubbed her eyes. “Please, go to bed, I’ll be there soon.”

“I figure we could arrange some sort of scouting party tomorrow morning, once we’ve all had some rest,” Ava went on blithely as though she hadn’t heard him. “We can see about mapping out some of this island. Mister Mills, I hear, is quite good with map making, though I’m sure one would have to be in order to sail a merchant vessel across the ocean and back.”

“A scouting party would be a good idea,” David admitted softly. “Perhaps keep our eyes peeled for a place we could settle.” There was no going around it– this place, wherever it was, was to become their home. They had nowhere else to run, no one else to turn to, and if there was no visible trace of this place on any maps, perhaps it would keep them safe from his cousin for just a little while longer. He turned his eyes as Ava stood, dousing the flames from the nearest candles along the wall, casting shadows upon them both.

“Come to bed, David,” She whispered. He rose to meet her, felt her small hands on his body, pulling herself close to him. They were so tired, just so tired.

“All right,” The day had long since finished and the King was too tired to fight against sleep any longer. Trailing behind Ava, he slowly extinguished the candles he had left light until there was nothing left but moonlight. Stretched out in bed, beneath sheets of cotton, he closed his eyes finally, letting sleep take over.

prologue

•March 29, 2009 • 2 Comments

The girls stood along the shoreline, soaking in the late summer sunlight upon the sands of the mighty ocean. The eldest had closed her eyes, listening to the waves as they crashed against the sand, breathing softly in and out. The younger frowned up at her sister. “You said you weren’t worried,” She said in a tone that suggested that she had been told otherwise. The elder frowned though she didn’t open her eyes.

“Hush!” She offered no explanation for the nerves, though it was obvious they weren’t going away. She pressed her hands to her stomach, trying not to feel ill. It was supposed to be a joyous time in her life– she’d had her first true Prophetic vision, yet it now meant she had to stand before the council and the High Mother. It was a distinct honor she had never had, though she and her sister had often played the scenario out when she had been younger and more prone to such childlike games. Now she was grown; she had begun bleeding months ago, her body had begun a slow but steady change towards womanhood, and now she had received her first vision.

It was a turning point in her young life that she had been eagerly awaiting. Everything about this moment had been predestined by her birth and the transfer of power from the Mother of All. She was happy that, unlike her mother, she would not be powerless in this world. Her mother had drawn the short end of the stick, born without a gift and without any hope of helping the sect other than to serve and aide the Elder and the Council. Well, she had given the greatest gift she could give and that had been the birth of her daughters.

A door opened and closed and shuffling feet across the sand prompted both girls to turn their head. The younger was grinning eagerly at the sight of their mother while the older only frowned with impatience. Her mother walked slowly, eyes downcast slightly as they always seemed to be, head bent as she kept her face stoic. Her eyes lifted only momentarily, meeting the gaze of her eldest daughters before she uttered only one sentence: “They’re waiting for you.”

Shoulders straightened and eyes focused in front of her, the girl followed her mother, impatient at the slow and even steps ahead of her, wishing instead to race into the ancient room and tell the women of what she had Seen. Of course, she knew she had to show some respect and decorum within these walls and refrained for urging her mother any faster. The door opened before her and her mother waited until the daughter had passed through before shutting it. Her mother wouldn’t be following– it wasn’t her place and so she was left alone with the great women of the island.

“Daughter of the Sight, you come before us to relay what you have seen,” The woman of the West said in a clear tone, initiating the session as all women remained standing, eyes facing one another as the Elder looked over the girl who had come before them. “Because this is a matter of great importance, we shall each listen. So say we all.”

“So say we all,” The others muttered, followed by the last voice from the Elder as she croaked out those same words.

The women waited until their Elder had been seated before they too took their seats. Before them, the girl fidgeted slightly, though tried to remain still and calm as she had been taught. A woman of the sect, especially a woman who came from such a powerful line, was expected to behave a certain way. She met the gaze of the Elder, catching a look of warmth and understanding in the eyes of the familiar. She would be fine, as her Grandmother had told her when the girl had relayed her dream, so long as she explained everything that she had Seen.

“I believe we are waiting only for you to begin,” Her Grandmother folded her hands, leaning back into the throne as she watched, waiting for her to begin. Taking this as a cue, the girl took a deep breath, stepping forwards as she began.

Her words blended and blurred as she told of the storm she had seen– of the waves that crashed and pulled and of the winds that raged and the thunder that shook the world to the very core. The lightning that had light up the lonely sky and of the ship that she had seen, silhouetted against the storm. Their fear had run through her veins, laced through the storm as the ship battled against the waves to stay afloat. She’d been unable to breathe, unable to keep the tears from flowing at the thought of seeing these lives smashed against the rocks.

She had cried out to the Mother to save these lives. She had Seen their pain, Seen why they were running across an ocean that rejected them and asked that they come to safe harbor once more. It was only then that her eyes had been opened and her jaw dropped once she saw the plan that the Mother of All had prepared for them.

“They are coming,” She finished at last, dropping her hands, turning her gaze to the council and her Grandmother. “They are coming because it is part of their destiny to land here.” She gulped before continuing. “It’s a blessing and a curse, though I’m not sure why. The Mother warned me though she wasn’t specific. These people could both lead us to better things or destroy us.”

“But how?” The West asked as the girl turned her head away. “No one has found us, not since we landed here generations ago!”

“It’s not my place to question the Mother of All,” She snapped back and was chastised with a look from her Grandmother.

“It does not matter what has been, rather that things could be changing drastically for us,” Sighing, she rose creakily to her feet and the other council women followed suite quickly. “There are no specifics so all we can do is wait and see when this shall come to pass.” There was a general murmur of approval among the fellow council members as they went through the motions of saying their farewell to the Elder, each leaving in turn until only the girl and her grandmother remained. The old woman gave the girl a small smile, placing a hand on her shoulder. “Asira, it does not become you, this graveness.”

“It comes with age,” Asira said wryly, giving the old woman a grin that made her laugh. She turned her head as her sister scrambled into the room, seated on the bench near the doorway, waiting for Asira to follow suit (which she did as always). The two sat in companionable silence before the younger girl spoke.

“You think the people will come?”

Asira sighed. “I don’t think. I know.” She closed her eyes as the younger followed suit, throwing a prayer to the Mother of All that they would find a solution to all of this, somehow.

COMING SOON

•January 11, 2009 • 2 Comments

Coming March 2009.

A thousand years of peace proclaimed on the night of the ball. The perfect opportunity to declare war upon the King as a six month, bloody campaign began. There was no hope for winning; into the night the exiled King and his court fled, going enroute by ship off into the sea. A chance storm blew them off course, landing on soil that was no their own. They have striven to make a new life here, away from the bad. It’s a fresh start for all, though some habits will forever die hard among them.

Even as they settle into life here, there is the unsettling fact that they aren’t alone on the island. The inhabitants, however, remain silent, watching and waiting in the darkness. All in due time, they whisper into the night, all in due time.